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I will accept any type of feedback for my writing, and I would like to know if I should publish another one of my writing pieces.
The idea of how Kitty releases all the hurt feelings of losing her family in the fire was a little surprising for me. It really shows growth in her character.
Does Kitty ever visits Owen's grave? Along with her mom and dad's?
It took me a while to read but when I finished, I thoroughly enjoyed the conclusion. You should make a sequel.