AcetheticallyPleasing

United States

Asexual || Dreamer || Hufflepuff
Hopeless romantic dreaming to find her true love
Songs || Stories || Poems
In love with two people, plus someone who can never be mine.

Message to Readers

My most recent song. I'd love some feedback.

Spare Us Both || Original Song

November 1, 2018

FREE WRITING

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1st Verse.

I still remember when you first said you loved me.
And I still remember how I thought, "Not likely".
You shared your kind words, said you'll always be here,
But it's hard for you to do so since all I show is fear.

2nd Verse.
You know I love you, and you know that I'm trying. 
You return the phrase, but I feel like you're lying. 
I want to believe that's how you see me, 
But my mind only whispers, "You're soon to leave."

Chorus.
This isn't fair to you, I'm scared to get close.
Just do us a favor and spare us both.
I can't believe you prize me, though I do know.
 Find someone who's confident, and spare us both. 

3rd Verse.
I'm sorry I can be so blind and unsure. 
I see my reflection, think, "Who would want her?"
I'm mean and I'm scared, so sensitive.
All of my thoughts are so negative.

Chorus.
This isn't fair to you, I'm so scared to get close.
Just do us a favor and spare us both.
I can't believe you prize me, though I do know.
Find someone confident, and spare us both. 

Bridge.
I, I, I don't know how to love myself, so
I, I, I don't know how you see such good in me when all I see is the bad.
It, it, it'll only hurt if you stay with me, and 
The last thing I want is for you to be unhappy.

End Chorus.
This isn't fair to you, I have no more hope.
Please do us a favor and spare us both.
There's no way you prize me, this I now know.
Find someone else, just go, and spare us both.
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