Peer Review by Crescent (United States)

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Adversity

By: rosemarywisdom


You never learn to fly until you're standing at the cliff.


Peer Review

What's striking about this example is that it doesn't need to be taking literally. This can be an analogy for a variety of things: Trying something for the first time, charging at something you've been avoiding, etc.


I would like to read more analogies! If each analogy is explained to its extent with twists and turns that the reader can't predict, it can be a very interesting read.


Reviewer Comments

2nd Review of the Corner Writing Club's December Reviewing Assignments. :)