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May I get a little help with sentence structure and my description. And anything else that needs a little work.
I think that your descriptions of sight and smell were really quite deep, especially your smell description. At first I was confused, but then I realized that what you were talking about was aromatherapy (sorry if I interpreted that wrong, but that's what it sounded like).
Really the best part of this was how you talked about the vanilla and lavender, and how "they" filled her with it to try to make her better.
You snuck in little details really well, like how she is familiar with church. The only thing I don't understand was the silk and linen. Where did these fabrics come from? Is she wearing them? That was the only thing that I think needed clarification. Otherwise, really good descriptions!