Peer Review by palindrome (United States)

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Draw a Star

By: Lee Fudge


FREE WRITING

Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
Why are you so hard to draw?
Come on,
It shouldn’t be this hard to draw,
ten staright lines!

Twinkle twin- DANG IT!
Little star,
I’m not doing good so far.
Come on,
I need this for school!

Twinkle twinkle lit- NO!
Little Star.
Just let me draw you!
THIS SHOULDN’T BE THIS HARD!
I SEE STARS EVERY NIGHT I SHOULD KNOW HOW TO DRAW ONE!

Twinkle tw-
You know what?
Forget this.
I’m going to just draw an asterisk.


Message to Readers

Please review this


Peer Review

The humor was so perfect! I feel the same way.


I think it is good where it is. I laughed so many times!


Reviewer Comments

So for the Corner Writing Club, we are reviewing partners. I will review a piece of yours every week and vice versa. I look forward to reading more of your work!