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if you're in a bad mood just write one of your characters getting their ass beat and it usually helps kinda
i might write somethin cute with rojo and oren soon :eyes:
Ah! I missed these characters! They're so fun and so real, honestly. They always feel so real, and I love that.
What's everyone else doing during this, because we're missing a character during this? Also, I'm wondering why they just let Verde beat on Baioretto; did they think he deserved it?
I love this series, honestly. This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!