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if you're in a bad mood just write one of your characters getting their ass beat and it usually helps kinda
i might write somethin cute with rojo and oren soon :eyes:
Verde surprised me! I didn't think he was the type to lose his head. But, 'Retto deserved it!
I think that a little more detail into Verde's life would be awesome. "Go cry to your little boyfriend!" Maybe I missed something, but who is Verde's bf?
Aside from the few grammatical mistakes, well done! I want a part three of the ROYGBIV household!!