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much like rojo, im tired and gay
This is so incredibly sweet and cute and I love it to pieces. Again, the characters are just so realistic and so distinct, I found myself thinking, "That's *exactly* what he would do." and that's just a credit to how well you write these characters. <3
I'm just curious as to how this is going to progress, haha. They're so cute together. Although, are they brothers or not? That part still confuses me a little.
This piece so, so cute; it's the kind of piece I would read if I just wanted to smile. I ship Rojo and Oren so much. <3 This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!