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I don't know about the last rhyme. I'd like some feedback so i can work on this and make it better
I really like the idea. I've always preferred fall and winter over spring and summer, and I think that the idea is expressed beautifully in this poem. I particularly like, "Summer is great, but fall is bold" and "Sledders zoom on bright white hills."
Two things. Firstly, your spacing seems kind of weird throughout this piece. I think you accidentally put a space in the fourth line of the first stanza. I would change unless it's meant to be part of the poem. Secondly, you could always do with more descriptions. The ideas are great here; maybe you could lengthen them a little and add more stanzas.
I loved reading this piece! Aside from the highlighted bits, it has good rhythm and flow and it really felt like the seasons. Great work and keep writing!