United States of America
hi, my name is camryn, and i like your hair :)
If you appear in my notifications, I'll be in yours.
If y'all want me to check out a piece or peer review it, let me know in the comments of one of my pieces and I'll do my best to get it done :)
I follow everyone no matter what. I always give likes back, follow back, and I try to peer review back!
Don't forget to leave a
╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱
╱╱┏╮╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱
╱╱┃┃╱╱╱┳╱┓┳╭┫┳┓
▉━╯┗━╮╱┃╱┃┣┻╮┣╱
▉┈┈┈┈┃╱┻┛┛┻╱┻┻┛
▉╮┈┈┈┃╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱
╱╰━━━╯╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱
- courtesy of SamG95 (im actually not sure if he's on here anymore but... he made this)
snapchat: cam_lily119
instagram: camryn_woods11
Written By: camlily
January 3, 2019
PROMPT: Water Drop
6 Comments
Riley Noel
I think this is truly an adorable piece. It sounds like something I would read in a children's book, simple yet beautifully written. I loved the water droplets exploration of the city and how you showed us a familiar world from a different perspective!
Poppy.M
This is wonderful I love it! It captures a moment so beautifully, but playfully at the same time. The idea of the raindrop, confused and alone, finding its family is such a special ending. This piece just made me smile! :)
camlily
@Luna Lemon thank you so much, I cannot even tell you how much I appreciate your feedback <3
Luna Lemon
This was so well done! I love the personification of the water droplet and the slow buildup as you go through its travels. I like how you showed all the urgent/somewhat chaotic life the raindrop discovered in beautifully phrased lines such as, ", avoiding the group of bicycling girls and the purposeful footsteps of men in fancy suits and shiny shoes". And the ending was amazing as you showed the raindrop going back to its "kin" to get away from the rush of human life.
I loved this! It was so well done and PERFECTLY fit the prompt. Great job, as always with you, and keep writing:)
camlily
thank you!! :D
loveletterstosappho
i love this!