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I'm a current 8th grader and I am just trying out writing for the first time. My sister introduced this site to me so I thought, "what the heck!" I would really appreciate your support in my everlasting journey to learn and improve.

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Please just Live.Breathe.Feel.Love. And never stop writing!


October 27, 2018

This world is tainted
Tainted by hate, jealousy, and fear
Fear of each other
Fear is truly the route of all problems
Fear is what starts the fight.

Fear is what sparks the fire
Fire. Endless raging fire
Piercing through even the purest of hearts
Why do you think people have guns?
Why do you think people use them?

Fear. Everyone has a fear
No matter if it's of something...
Or someone
Fear controls the body
And spirit
No matter if you think about what you're doing

You should not let fear control you
You must not let fear control you
Or you will never stop hating
You will never stop taking the gun out
Fear is what makes you fire that gun



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  • Live.Breathe.Feel.Love

    @AbigailSauble Yes, I do agree with you, pulling the trigger is sometimes an act of love. But in this case I needed to put something to do with fear... So I just automatically thought of when people get guns out of fear from something.

    over 1 year ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Well....actually, sometimes, pulling the trigger is an act of protection and love. Love for your country, protecting those you love. :)

    over 1 year ago
  • Live.Breathe.Feel.Love

    Reaf is fear spelled backwards, and if you look up the meaning of reaf it means to rob. I know this sounds cliche but sometimes fear robs us from our happiness. You must never let fear of something or someone control you life, you must make every moment count!

    over 1 year ago