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Message to Readers
Normally I don't write about love or breakups or anything but this kind of poetic format came to me and I thought it could be good. Let me know what you think; feedback appreciated :)
Wow! That was a punch in the face! It was so creative and left the reader thinking!
I would like to know some backstory, because this really had me wondering ‘why?’
Thank you so much for participating in my contest! The support means so much and this is such an amazing piece! It’s definitely in the running for first! Keep on writing!