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EVERYTHING! I couldn't find a single fault; the wording, flow, and syntax is all pristine.
I would love to know what inspired you to write this. Its a novel idea, and you executed it perfectly.
Reading this was an honor. I would like to thank you for writing it, and I feel that I can express everything I feel in one fittingly cyclic word-