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The conversations in this piece delighted me, because the interactions were so real! I was surprised when I realized that the characters were based off the colours of the rainbow.
I think this writing was an astounding piece of work. I see nothing that needs changing.
I LOVED reading this, it was fun! I'd love to see a part 2 of the ROYGBIV Household!