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If you think of a title you think would suit it better, please let me know. Other then that the usual.
The entire poem moved me, because knowing you, Kitty , writing a "positive poem" isn't your thing. However, I think you did very well on this piece, and I'm seriously moved by your line, "I wish I could say that happiness is a constant."
I believe poetry is a way of telling a story without using too many words. Being that this is a poem, with so much emotion, no idea needs to be deepened.
Always keep writing, Kitty!