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Message to Readers
It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out of your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to.
- JRR Tolkien, Fellowship of the Ring
I love the lines "I write to escape. It's a dangerous business, no doubt, which is what makes it worth it." I think this was really well said! I love it.
I definitely started writing as a way to escape, especially from a young age! So this writing really appeals to me.
Keep writing! This is great!