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Just the usual. This actually did happen I was across the street in plain sight all day and my mother seeing as I was laughing so hard I was literally on the ground. She thought that my friend had given me drugs and that I was dumb enough to actually take them. She then after ten minutes of me crying and her realizing she made a mistake. Then came and apologized to me say that she thought my friend had offered me drugs and that I had taken them, then finished her apology with the words, "You can never be too careful." I beg to differ.
"You can never be too careful." But can you ever be completely careful?
I think that a simple line of poetry is enough of a story. When writing a poem, I never expect someone to add too much detail into their work.
Always keep writing Kitty!