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This was super fun to read! I thought you used a bit too much "telling not showing" (but I do that a lot, and I don't really mind), but I really liked the instances where you "showed," like with Blue and the worry stone and Purple's royalty.
I think during the scenes where they interact with their Aunt and Uncle, most of the children all act the same, all shouting and whatnot, whereas, I don't think all the children would act like that. Maybe make their ways of speaking more distinct, or give them habits (running fingers through hair, putting hand on chin, etc.). I would also like to witness how they all interact when it's just them (the siblings, that is), and in a more calm environment (hence the ending idea).
First, thank you so much for responding to one of my prompts! Second, this was super fun to read. I personally love looking up color meanings and whatnot, so it's awesome to see the characteristics put onto people and see which ones would get along and which wouldn't. Let me know if you think of an ending!