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The originality to it! I never thought about what it would be like if Sunshine and Rain had 'children' or, 'the rainbow'. ;) I really love the subject, and how you described the colors! I've always enjoyed reading/writing pieces based on days of the week, and matching colors up with a certain activity, or day, etc. And I love how each color, 'each child', has their own personality. :)
It'd be interesting to read a piece about how Ray and Rain met. Writing personifications on the weather is always so enjoyable. ;) This piece is so lively, it was easy to get caught up in it. :)
Fantastically written! Your descriptions of the colors are unique and alive. I can see them as clearly as though they were standing in front of me. :)
Keep up the great work! God bless!