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It opened the curtain a tad more, and let the true, shining light of your piece shine.
Two things I would love to know more about are: what is their adventure they are about to embark upon, and what is their history before?
I really love this piece, "Little Talks". The language was beautiful, and I just adore how you write; the way your words are so perfect, precise, unique, wondrous, and how they fit together so gorgeously.
Your explaining of the cats' movements, appearance, and their purring, is absolutely amazing— so life-like! Amazing job!