Peer Review by UNC ANGEL (United States of America)()

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Me

By: Jeremy Houle


Jesus saved me from my sin.


Message to Readers

This sums up my life because it is the lens through which I analyze everything.


Peer Review

You used the power of suggestion to show people about your faith. The story unfolds in my brain that you are a Christian who praises God because he saved you


I would say it encourages me that i found someone who likes to write about their faith


Reviewer Comments

i am also a Christian and one person pier reviewed one of my pieces and told me that i should take God's name out of my story and the part about me being a Christian out of my story they said it could turn non-Christians off. I encourage you to write about your Faith in God no matter what people say, its what i try to do