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Creativity, tell me why I can write this and not all the other things I'm meant to be writing? A word vomit in the style of a rhyming-rhythmic slam poem of some kind? Idk. Enjoy I guess
I like how she seems sometimes to contradict herself. First surroundings g herself with piles of gold, then throwing the jewels to the peasants. If I’m wrong about, please tell me, lol! I love the last line!! I can’t even explain why, I just absolutely love it.
How did she die of her own loneliness? It Just doesn’t make sense to me.
Amazing piece overall! :D This was the third of three prize reviews from my co text forever ago. All three were great pieces, congrats! :D