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JediKnightGirl

United States

15 y/o
Demisexual-Bisexual, she/her
Hopeless romantic, fangirl, feminist, anxiety
Hufflepuff, Hamiltrash, & more
Obsessed with Thomas Jefferson
Artist, Writer, Musician, Singer
Love, music, friendship are everything
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Forest Fire

October 13, 2018

it reminds me of decadent chocolate cake
with bright scarlet frosting
topped with yellow sprinkles
and rimmed with lit candles

soft cherry clouds lingering in the sky
ashes landing like gray butterflies
on emeralds still hanging
from a few untouched trees

smoke still spilling into the air like ink
long after the sky turns blue
like sapphires set in a silver diadem
or my blue eyes fluttering shut

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6 Comments
  • Chloe_Cat

    Nice job relating it to cake. Keep writing!!!


    10 months ago
  • Feminist NG

    Love this piece so much. Thanks and keep writing :)


    10 months ago
  • Catlover

    Just wanted to let you know about my book club: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/85966/version/163019


    10 months ago
  • f l o r a

    Hey, JNG,
    I've actually been very busy with school and have unfortunately come down with a really bad cold ;C. It's pretty suckish, but I'll try to finish these reviews by next Friday.
    I'm really sorry for that inconvenience.
    -i.c.


    10 months ago
  • mariemare

    this is really beautiful imagery and phrasing, you seem very creative and thoughtful.


    10 months ago
  • Kaitlyn Hanson

    this is really cool! the imagery is amazing!!!


    10 months ago