purplepanache

United Arab Emirates

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when i'm done with school i'll cut off all my hair and dye it green and wear only late-victorian stuff.

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Anarchy of the heart

October 12, 2018

PROMPT: Open Prompt

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Amidst vanilla flavoured days
Of lemonade bright
On cotton candy skies
Let's draw our silhouettes
Messily etched
Yet beautifully imperfect
Wild like dandelions
Yet sweetly lily
Let's paint our dreams
In shining glitter
And send them to outer space
In paper airplanes
Let's dream for a forever
Like the day is infinite
And the night is untrue
 

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6 Comments
  • purplepanache

    @stripedfly1001 Thank you very much


    over 1 year ago
  • janice

    I love how you use creative descriptions and pair up words that normally don't go together. It makes the piece unique, helps it to stand out, and is super-creative. These lines are my favorites:
    "Like the day is infinite
    And the night is untrue"


    over 1 year ago
  • purplepanache

    Thanks y'all for the nice words


    over 1 year ago
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    Whoa, I absolutely love this! The lines "Let's draw our silhouettes Messily etched Yet beautifully imperfect" and "send them to outer space in paper airplanes" are such perfect choices for this piece and they really give a sense of happiness and hope to it. :D


    over 1 year ago
  • Araw

    This poem is so sweet and nice


    over 1 year ago
  • ~Kate T

    I love this! The adjectives you use make this piece pop right off the page, short but stunning.


    over 1 year ago