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Message to Readers
"Constant yearning for the supposed "enjoyment" of the future will only lead to actual misery of the present."
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Some sentences in here stand out so strongly, I almost gasped. Very well written!
This speech energised me, and made me pumped to close this site and actually do some work for once ;)
I feel like adding personal experiences would make listeners connect with your speech even better!
This was lovely! You have raw skill, which is something very rare to have. Please keep writing and honing your skill!
You are a promising writer, and I shall be keeping my eyes open for more of your work :)