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collom lunes are pretty fun tbh but i gave up
I LOVED the way this was written! The flow completely enraptured me!
I would like to know what inspired you to write this. It has an elusiveness that keeps me asking for more, which is the hallmark of a good writer.
What a beautiful piece! I am very impressed, well done!