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This was beautiful! When it comes to imagery you have a gift, and your word choice was clean as well.
I would like to know what prompted you to make a poem out of two different haiku. It makes a gorgeous effect, I really like it!
This was a very elegant poem that spoke multitudes. At a few places you didn't stick to the traditional haiku syllable count (5-7-5), and I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but it gave it a very avant-garde style. Keep up the good work!