asteria

United States

don't settle for the mundane;

chaos is far more intriguing.

Message to Readers

constructive criticism welcome

leaking

January 14, 2019

FREE WRITING

6
when i finally
seek help,
my silent plea
forever becomes
another's.

is everyone so
self-centered,
they cannot
see?

or are they
blinded
by apathy?

i am
leaking,
ripping,
splitting
at the seams.

and no one sees.
~asteria

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3 Comments
  • asteria

    thank you @Julius Ceasar! it really sucks a lot. and thank you @Paperbird! raw and relatable is all i ever want to be.


    about 2 years ago
  • paperbird

    oh my god, this is amazing--so raw and relatable.


    about 2 years ago
  • Julius Caesar

    i love the rhythm on this piece! unfortunately, i understand exactly what you mean. people hear, but they do not _listen_. it's irritating when no one understands what's happening to you.


    about 2 years ago