Peer Review by idealideation (United States)

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By: asdfouhafviug


Being stealth is a lot harder than I imagined. I always thought that once I got on T and completely passed that it would be easy. It turns out that I was wrong. There are a lot of things that happen in my life that don’t happen to the boy. 

Message to Readers

Sorry I haven’t written anything. I’ve been busy at school. (I go to a boarding school now!!)

Peer Review

I assume that this is part of your story, in which case, I love that you're telling it! I think it's really important that you wrote about going on T.

The only things I really caught were grammatical mistakes, as this is a short piece as of right now.

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