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This entire writing moved me. I once wrote a poem, and in it I wrote "Memories are orbs of the past, we can't relive, a look back of times we should forgive." And your entire writing of memories, brought tears to my eyes, because memories aren't always delightful, but they do in a way shape a person.
I think this is a phenomenal piece of work, I think no changes were needed. Well done!
All day I've been reading prompts and free writing(s) and I think so far, this is the best piece I've stumbled upon.