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Thinking of extending on this somehow. Thoughts?
I love how this piece is so simple but has impact and meaning behind it. I love how you twisted the conversation from love to lust so cleverly.
I would love it if you could expand on this idea and make it a longer poem :) maybe by saying why you didn't believe in love but believed in lust!
Overall this was really good :)