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Marks

By: Jada Voigt


PROMPT: Open Prompt

Marks left on my skin

From a passionate lovers kiss. 

Marks left on my skin

From a hateful persons fists. 

Marks left on my skin

From the touch of a blade to my wrist. 



Peer Review

The different types of marks one can get on their skin.


Repetition.


I'd really like to see you add more to the list considering how many different types of marks one can get: scars, bruises, tattoos, lipstick stains, sunburns, etc.


Reviewer Comments

I don't normally like short pieces but I feel like you did an exceptional job. Nice work!