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Message to Readers
Shows that not only your fighting for a life, but everyone is. And I respect that
It really flows which is really appealing to read. It's also written very cleverly.
It shows the issue in a different perspective
Maybe if you wrote more? Or use even more description and imagery to add more meaning behind this piece.
This is great so far :) The meaning of it is great and it is written cleverly. Keep up the good work!
I love this :)