Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
The flow is easy to follow, and addicting. The voice, is insightful, and the subject matter is intriguing, and how the two topics connect. Basically, this is really really well done, and I super relate to the narrator.
I understand the importance of this experience, and can see how much the reader values it.
There was a good balance, and the voice was very clear.
I was satisfied by the ending.
This is already a really good draft. It's clean and precise, it has great flow, and it's easy to understand and be pulled into.
Amazing job, you're an inspiration.