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I was bored the other day, so I came up with this while sitting on the kitchen floor. XD Enjoy, and let me know what you think of it. :)
The excitement of it.
I know that dreams are often vague, but you only touch on the 'where' she is in the very beginning, where you mention that she's shoving her way through brush and trees. It sounds like she's been here before, or in a similar situation. I'd love to know more, but I suppose just an add-on to this story would be the most helpful in adding sought-after explanations. :)
Very well-done! I love short-exciting blurbs of writing like this. :) Keep up the good work! God bless!