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Message to Readers
light. love. hope. take care of yourself and others. sometimes things help. sometimes things can give you hope.
I like the way your poem skips around like it's the thoughts you think, the ideas swirling in your head.
I think you should add more detail about how you feel. you should deepen what causes such bad feelings to float to the surface. I think if you were more specific in parts it would hold the attention of the reader longer.
overall i think its pretty great, i would think about what you have and try and see if yoiu can keep a theme throughout the poem and make it deep and obvious