Peer Review by annacatherine (Australia)

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Heartache

By: Catlover


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    Loving you is a heartache.
A constant struggle
That pains me.
It hurts me
In my chest
Like a dagger to the heart.
Loving you is difficult.
For I want to tell you
How I feel,
But out of fear
I remain silent.
Silent as you fall in love
With someone else.
And try not to get jealous.
Silent as you think of me as a friend
And nothing else...
 


Message to Readers

A poem about feelings I used to have...


Peer Review

I loved the literary devices used in this and the emotive language. It made me feel what you felt!


I would love if this poem had more imagery and was maybe a little longer? But it's really good :)


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