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The feeling of a strong, rebellious character that I get from reading it. Sounds like the following story is going to be highly intriguing.
I don't think anything in this piece, but I really want to know what happens in the story (In case I didn't mention that already :) :)
I really would love to read the story that comes after this piece. You managed to grab my attention very well and I find myself waiting on the edge of my seat for more.