Peer Review by Quille (United States)

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Anything and Everything: Prologue

By: star_girl


FREE WRITING

beyond



the 



veil


that


ties


together


our stories.



This is my story. I suppose since it is a story, I should start at the very beginning. Way back when... well, let's just say none of this happened.

Believe what you want. You cannot escape fate. 

Been told that my whole life. 

Believe what I want. I cannot escape fate.

But I can tempt it. 
 


Message to Readers

Hope you like


Peer Review

The feeling of a strong, rebellious character that I get from reading it. Sounds like the following story is going to be highly intriguing.


I don't think anything in this piece, but I really want to know what happens in the story (In case I didn't mention that already :) :)


Reviewer Comments

I really would love to read the story that comes after this piece. You managed to grab my attention very well and I find myself waiting on the edge of my seat for more.