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I loved, loved, loved the spacing, and the last line is pretty awesome.
I'm just curious as to what *this* is. What happened? What's going on? Also, the first sentence/seven lines are very interesting, and I'm wondering why they are what they are.
This is super cool, honestly! I love the writing style and the tone of the piece. If you continue this, I have a feeling it's going to be a really unique, really awesome novel!