we are all made of stardust.
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Written By: star_girl
September 28, 2018
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Definitely going to throw my vote in with the rest of these guys and say I love it and you are going to do more, right?
Luv it. ;)
This is so cool! I really really want to read more <3
How intriguing, I really like this!!
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ohmigoodness-this is wonderful
I love this!!! I hope there is more because this leaves such a mysterious tone. I love how vague this is but how much it still brings the reader into the story. The formatting was an especially nice touch with the first 8 words being their own lines. Each one really stood out and really intrigued me. I love how you ended this with, "But I can tempt it. ". That's such a creative idea; writing about how you can't escape fate but can tempt it.
If you're going to continue with this, I'm excited for more! Even if this was short, I can already tell you write really well and can really build up a reader's interest.
Great job and keep writing:)
(She recommended this to me.)
Aww, thanks. Means a lot, you know, since I'm up and coming. I'm rosemarywisdom's friend.
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!
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