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paperbird

United States

Message to Readers

Feedback is always appreciated :)
Kind of different from the first version but an improvement in my opinion

Rain

September 26, 2018

FREE WRITING

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It comes, seeping, through the rough city glands
Splattering the sidewalks as oily streets clear
The sky warps the ceiling as a hot gray blanket
The rightful odor of earth clings to the soggy air
The warm rain, it clusters in haphazard drifts
Dance with me now while it shines through it all

 

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