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The beautiful subject matter! Honestly, it's hard to really get me to read something that isn't super exciting, but you wrote this so well, that I was just pulled along by your descriptions. :)
Absolutely! Doing something so simple, something that you may not think makes much of a difference, can really touch someone, and in so doing, change your heart, your life, and your perspective. It's a powerful message that really needs to be shared in this modern world. :)
'A little can do so much.'
In the beginning you had many scenes, and a little bit of background as to the 'why' this duo were doing this. Then in the second half, you have the reflection. Which was perfect because it leaves the reader with a thought. :)
Absolutely. To think that one 'styrofoam tray' can help someone, and change your perspective on the world. Wow. Great job! I feel inspired. :)
KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!! If you don't get some award in this competition, well.....you have been cheated. Really, you have done a great job! Even if you don't win, know that you have touched my heart, and anyone else who reads this. :)
It's hard to say something that I haven't already said about this. It was completely fabulous.
Don't stop writing! God bless!