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I'm very nervously. very excitedly turning in my final draft of this piece! Wish me luck, everyone! :D
This is great! I love the way you told it. I can see you put a lot of feeling into this.
I know why this is important to you because I also feel called to do missions, and everything in my power to spread the word of God.
I think this piece great the way it is. This must have really changed a lot for you.
I don't think anything needs added or omitted.
You are a great writer and I think you should continue to write while doing missions. Keep up the good work!
You could write Christian children's stories and self publish them on Amazon:) God bless you!