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I'd like certain rephrasing with different sentences. Anything else to add on. Better title
I really liked how you quickly mentioned it wasn't just a movie about sports. I think with more detail and more diverse wording you could make the writing more grabbing.
Like I said before, you went into a lot of detail about how the movie wouldn't just be enjoyed by those who like sports. You made it very convincing.
You could write more detail about the cinematography. It would help if you wrote what you think could be made better in the movie. You didn't go into much detail about why you were thinking what you said.
Its really enjoyable and I really like how you talked about a lot of different things rather than making it all about sports.