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My paper for my English course. I revised it, let me know what you think.
I love how you chased your dream and didn't just throw your script away when you couldn't finish it - how you just let it lie because you knew that, someday, you would finish it. That's encouraging because I, too, have an idea that I'm just letting lie because I know I can't do justice to it yet. If you can finish, so can I! Rock on, sister!
No, not really. You did a pretty good job of including all the important details and making them flow well.
I know this isn't a comment, but how do you issue announcements and such? Is that just something that opens up when you start following people or gain a large enough following?