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Made minor changes to spacing and formatting (I think it's good to go now hehe I edited so many times)
How you chose to conclude the poem. It was simple yet held the weight of the poem on its shoulders like atlas. Well done.
There is a lot of emotion within this poem - do you feel a strong connection to it? Did it feel like a reflection of some sort?
I like what you did. A lot. I don't have many complaints about it, the only thing I would have to nit pick on would probably be your choice in placement with some lines, but other than that, it was a soulful and well built piece. You should be proud. You're a proficient writer with a skilled tongue and hand.
Overall, just keep doing what you're doing.
Hats off to you,