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Message to Readers
I have no idea how you guys will feel after this piece ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I loved the writing style and urgency and kind of vagueness of it all. And the descriptions (I'm not sure if that's what they should be called): amazing, beautiful. I really love this piece, honestly.
I dunno, honestly... I feel like this isn't really the kind of piece that would elicit a need for more information (i.e. descriptions of characters/scenes). I really liked this piece in general, so I can't really think of anything specific. Maybe the occasional broken line, like what you do in the beginning with "I need to get out of my head." That way the one section in the beginning that has that doesn't seem oddly placed.
First, thank you for entering! Second, I love your writing style and how it's kind of broken, like someones actual thoughts, and the urgency it conveys. I also love your footnote, it was very informative. Make sure your full stops (periods) are consistent regarding the ends of lines (I don't particularly care if you use periods at the end of lines or not, so long as it's consistent throughout the whole thing).