Squidward dance

Squid Bean

Australia

I'm using this to improve my writing and express myself. I like:
- STAR WARS
- MARVEL UNIVERSE
- Favourite colour green
- Book Genres: Science Fiction, Dystopian, Mystery, Adventure, Survival

#15wordstories - The girl and the mirror

September 17, 2018

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She always took her little white porcelain doll, hugging it, brushing her teeth before bedtime. 
Looking into the mirror, she smiled to herself, in a blink, her glass reflection shattered. 
She rubbed her eyes, peering into the glass closely, she raised her hand to touch.
Her hand delicately brushed the glass, leaving a mist layer staining the mirror forever. 
The mirror reverberated, ripping reality, the doll was gone, her reflection replaced with a shadow.
The girl stepped back in shock, as the white shadow began to peel and crack.
Her skin turned white, looking to herself, her heart shuddered and skipped a beat.
As she realized, she was now the white porcelain doll, a white shadow, with no smile.
The white doll, now a girl, grinned into the mirror, dropped the girl she shattered. 

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4 Comments
  • stripedfly

    Congrats on coming in third place!!


    8 months ago
  • Johanna

    This is really cool! But creepy...


    9 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    This reminds me of the girl in the book Cuckoo Song, have you read it? (Would recommend if you're okay with horror books haha). I like how you combined all these 15-word mini stories into a larger one!


    9 months ago
  • Onion3102

    This is super coool! Great way to interpret the prompt "the nature in humanity"!


    9 months ago