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Message to Readers
Whoop! Writer's block begone!
The lack of punctuation adds a rhythm that gives the work an almost lyrical feel. If I'm being honest, adding punctuation would lessen the impact this poem has :)
The general lack of punctuation gives the few times where the writer uses exclamation points or question marks an extra significance. The sometimes rhyming stanzas give the piece a feeling off off-kilter speech, and better accentuates the stanzas that do not rhyme, giving the reader a sense that these stanzas are more important.
I love how you continued the theme throughout the poem, and how you consistently repeated the main ideas through the stanzas.