ChairsRAwesome

Australia

Mainly just here to fan-girl over my friends' work.

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HURLLLL I HATE IT THERES SO MUCH ANGST AND THE WRITINGS ALL WEIRD. *hurl*. IM POSTING IT ANYWAY. HOPE YOU LIKE IT, CUZ I SURE DON'T

15 Word Story

September 16, 2018

FREE WRITING

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The poison wraps its' slim, cold fingers around my throat choking me with swallowed tears.

The poison clouds my vision, everything I see becomes sapped of colour, sapped of love.

It's weighing down my blood, making every move feel like wading through a thick sludge.

Don't know how I got infected but if i could, I would find a cure. 
Here is my entry into Onion's 15 word story. 

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11 Comments

  • Ree Sethu

    WOW!! amazing piece!


    8 months ago

  • AntChanel

    this is pretty good, in all honesty


    about 2 years ago

  • DisdaininurSmile

    mad relate. For real though this piece is filled with amazing imagery, very well done boo boo


    about 2 years ago

  • Corner Writing Club

    Hi! We're notifying everyone who expressed interest in Option 1 of our poll that Messaging System has indeed won, and we've started the petition! You can contribute by commenting your name to our piece.


    about 2 years ago

  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Awesome job at this. ;D


    over 2 years ago

  • ALangford

    nu this is super good there's not too much angst ((not that there's such a thing as too much angst lmao))


    over 2 years ago

  • R.j.Elsewhere

    I love you, and I'm proud


    over 2 years ago

  • Anha

    Oof, don't worry, angst can become poetic with writing like this. You totally did it!


    over 2 years ago

  • Araw

    Proud of u boo. Good job on posting.


    over 2 years ago

  • Plausible.Poems

    Wow nice


    over 2 years ago

  • Onion3102

    OMG YAY! THANK YOU FOR POSTING! Great job!!


    over 2 years ago